Feedeback on my draft.

• The use of colours and the image used is very appropriate. - I shall carry on using these colours and images.
• It is not clear that it is a music magazine - i will add features to my cover to make this clear.
• strapline "the magazine for radical people", it does not suggest explicitly that your magazine is for any particular music genre. - i shall have to think of a strap line that connotes something to do with music
•  lot of blank space on the page - fill up the spaces with features.